Im here on behalf of [link] This image actually got my attention when i was going through all the folder and that should tell you there is something you are doing right. The first thing thats noticable is how well you used your pencils to shade the living daylight out of her clothes,it really makes the image standout and thats the pull to most images. For the anatomy of the girl,most of it is preety spot on and i like the stomach area because it defines the stretch preety well,although i do feel the upper arm needed abit of attention. The bicep n tricep isnt noticed and at that particular position,they ought to be. Perhaps it was done this way to retain the feminine feel of the image,if so you can check out some tutorials about drawing feminine muscle online. The hair is very sleek and calm the way its been shaded but could use a bit of more detail to make it look more catchy. Overall though this image still wins
I'm here on behalf of because your piece was in the group's critique requested folder. i think the pose is brilliant, great job with the anatomy and the shading and detail on the clothes you should've put a bit more detail on the hair to make it look more realistic and the hands are simply wonderful
i love it!
This image actually got my attention when i was going through all the folder and that should tell you there is something you are doing right. The first thing thats noticable is how well you used your pencils to shade the living daylight out of her clothes,it really makes the image standout and thats the pull to most images.
For the anatomy of the girl,most of it is preety spot on and i like the stomach area because it defines the stretch preety well,although i do feel the upper arm needed abit of attention. The bicep n tricep isnt noticed and at that particular position,they ought to be. Perhaps it was done this way to retain the feminine feel of the image,if so you can check out some tutorials about drawing feminine muscle online.
The hair is very sleek and calm the way its been shaded but could use a bit of more detail to make it look more catchy.
Overall though this image still wins
i think the pose is brilliant, great job with the anatomy and the shading and detail on the clothes you should've put a bit more detail on the hair to make it look more realistic and the hands are simply wonderful